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Post by berry on Aug 17, 2009 8:45:29 GMT -5
Name(s): Peonybreeze Gender: she-cat Age:34 moons Clan: RainbowClan Rank: warrior Short Description: Peonybreeze is a normal average female cat. She has an slender body, and most would think she was fragile because of the way she looks.
//Whats on the outside//: //Body// What looks like a fragile flower isn't fragile at all. Her legs are long, with short fur at the end. Her body is well built, with muscle, like any cat would have from the lifestyle they live. She takes after her mother in looks, but takes after her smaller-than average father in body build.
//Pelt// Peonybreeze has a beautiful golden pelt, almost like the sun. She has sleek fur, though short. Dark tabby stripes the color of bronze streak across the bottom and top of her pelt, leaving her with white sockings on her paws and a white underbelly.
//Eyes// Like a peony, though they are mostly pink or white, Peonybreeze's eyes are a dark blue, almost a violet shade.
//Whats on the Inside//: Peonybreeze's name is correct; she has a brave, fearsome personality, and she is a good and loyal cat, but she is probably the fiestiest cat in the clan! She is defensive of her clanmates, and is easily the most spirited cat in all of RainbowClan. She is known for her stubborness, and is a little smart-alecky. But she can be sweet, and she sticks to her beliefs. If something is a problem, she'll try her hardest to fix it, and that normally doesn't work out. Peonybreeze is never discouraged. She is also very supportive of the new leaders/deputy/medicine cat of her clan. Her cheerful spirit normally brings out the best in everyone
//Tell us a story//: Mother: Keona Father: Halfleg Grandmother: Feather- Keona's mother
Her past: As always, fairy tales aways end up starting with a poor maiden, dressed in rugged clothing, or having an evil relation with her stepmother, or having a curse put on her until true love's first kiss breaks the spell. Peonybreeze's story, well, isn't close to a fairy tale. It might be, though it matters on who sweeps her up off her paws. It's also not a gooey love story either.
Keona, a rogue, happened to be wandering around RainbowClan's border, hunting when she stumbled upon a handsome RainbowClan warrior. Most people people believe in love at first sight, and kind of like a fairy tale, it 'twas love at first sight. Keona was pregnant within a month. Soon enough, 4 kittens were born. They were born under a bundle of peonies. Halfleg wanted to give them proper clan names, but Keona wanted to pick the first part, so he let her. She named Peonykit, Twistedkit, Treekit, and Acornkit. Well, after the kits were old enough to listen, walk, run, and see, Keona and Halfleg were found out. RainbowClan was angry at Halfleg, and Keona was scared they would take it out on her kits and her. She broke up with Halfleg, and Halfleg took it hard. He was wandering by TwolegPlace one night, and some young drunken male Twolegs grabbed him, and fed him beer, the insides of cigarettes, and human drugs. Halfleg still had half custody of his kits like Keona did, but he was angry at the humans, and he was crazy, drugged, and sick. Peonykit, being the oldest, knew Keona would leave them with Halfleg and their father would hurt her siblings. Instead of letting Keona know, knowing very well that her mother would take them away, and even in that darkest hour, Peonykit still loved her father. She didn't want to see him this way, so she took the beating as punishment for doing nothing. Luckily, some hikers found a tiny gray kitten being attacked by a larger cat, so they grabbed the tom and threw him in their car and drove away. Peonykit, still bleeding, found her siblings where they all normally hid to wait. Twistedkit sent out a search party for herbs, and he treated his older sister's wounds. Well then, Keona came back the next day, her belly swollen. Peonykit knew her mother was pregnant again, and even though she still hurt, she was happy, sad, and excited all at the same time. Keona went to hunt for breakfast the next morning, but she was gone for four days. On the fifth day, Keona came back with a cat, almost identical to her. "This is your grandmother." She had said, and beamed at her mother. Feather smiled weakly at them, and she coughed. Peonykit watched her grandmother, they caught her mice each day, and Keona went to talk to the other rogues for news of Halfleg. Well, each day, Feather got worse. The mice they fed her were perfectly healthy, and she said she was full after 2 mice. By then, Peonykit was 5 moons old, along with her other siblings. They knew what was to come of their grandmother, but Keona lashed at them the day they spoke of her death. Since then, Peonykit and her grandmother had grown very close. Well, one day, Keona was gone, and Feather lay on her side, gasping for breath. Peonykit had sent her brothers and sister out to look for herbs near by, and she sat next to her dying grandmother. Feather's deep blue eyes looked Shimmeringkit's dark green right in the middle and said, "You'll be destined for great things, choose carefully." And she died. Right there. Keona came back, and saw her dead mother, and screamed at her daughter, " YOU KILLED MY MOTHER!" She leaped at her, clawing Peonykit, and then she wailed, and was in despression for weeks. They tried to make her eat, and that night, sneakily, they replaced their grandmother's body with a dead raven. The next day, the large bird was gone, replaced by a pile of bones. Peonykit hid her grief, and buried herself with work with her siblings. Well, Keona had just gotten over Feather's death when yet another disaster struck. Keona was chasing a rat onto the Thunderpath, when a monster(semi-truck) drove into her back legs, crushing them. Keona managed to drag herself back to her kits, and reaching them, she said, " I love you, and so did your father," gave them all a lick, and died, her heart giving out after too much grief, remorse, and pain. Peonykit was going to be lost in remorse for the rest of her life, realizing she could have prevented this. She brought what was left of the scraps of her family, which turned out to be just Twistedkit, since Treekit and Acornkit decided to find a easier lifestyle, the life of a kittypet. RainbowClan hated their father, but they knew that it wasn't the kit's fault they were born to a wrong cat.
IC Example: In the darkness of the night, a sleek cat climbed her way through the tree's leaves. It was a warm night, not too chilly. The tree she was climbing had a soft bark, and the tree was slanted, making it too easy to climb without claws. Her tail out for balance, Peonybreeze made her way to the top branches. Looking out of the leaves, her violet eyes sparkling, she called out to the warriors of Silverpelt. Tonight was the night of all nights. The one night a moon she shared with one of her family. A special member.
"Mother? Are you there?" The golden she-cat whispered, barely loud enough to hear. Then a sound, the beautiful sound of tinkling bells made her tail stand up straight. I am here, little one. At the voice, Peonybreeze let out a wail. "Oh Mother, why did you have to die? You seemed so strong, but then Feather..." She cut off, as Keona was twinkling brightly in front of her. It was only destiny, my brave daughter. You couldn't have done anything about it. The starry cat looked at Peonybreeze so gently, her daughter's heart thought it would break. "Couldn't you have stayed any longer? Just a little bit longer?" She asked desperately. Keona looked at her daughter sadly. I'm afraid not, dear daughter. Wiping her wet eyes on her paw's fur, Peonybreeze asked a question without meeting her mother's gaze. " You're in StarClan, they know everything," She paused, and continued. " Does Halfleg still love our family?" It was then that Keona looked like her heart was broken, too. That is not in our paws, Peonybreeze. Sighing, Peonybreeze said to her mother, " I love you, and Twistedtail does too. He told me to tell you that." Turning away, she said, " I thought StarClan had all the answers. I guess they don't." Then she walked away.
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Post by &&Fell&& on Aug 17, 2009 12:13:37 GMT -5
Accepted!
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