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Post by berry on Sept 1, 2009 16:59:38 GMT -5
Name(s): Skystar Gender: tom Age: 30 moons Clan: StormClan Rank: leader Short Description: A big white tomcat with piercing blue eyes. His voice is kinda deep, and the females just swoon.
//Whats on the outside//: //Body// Skystar, as said, is a bigggg cat. Not like a normal average cat, but like a Maine Coon size. (it's a type of cat, in case you didn't know. In battle, it's easy for him to squash the unlucky cat beneath him. He's very fit, and has distinct muscles that make any she-cat, even in other clans, swoon over him. You can see it shining and rippling throughout his pelt. His legs are long, short-tuffed, and pure. He has a long tail, so long if you bend it backwards it will be the exact length of his body. His paws are large, and his pads are scarred with scratches.
//Pelt// Skystar doesn't exactly like burrs clinging to his pelt, so he keeps it slightly clean, at least, on the outside. Even in the winter, his pelt is so fluffy and puffy, it makes him look like a giant snowball bounding right toward you. In greenleaf, it makes him stick out like a glow in the dark shirt in a cave. One of his many scars is right across his right eyes, making him look even more handsome.
//Eyes//Skystar's eyes are just the right size, no matter which view you see, though when he does so much to gaze at you, your heart either feels like it could break, (in a good way!) or, you'll be in severe pain. Orbs the color of light blue frost stare penatratingly at you, and you suddenly feel cold. They always feel the same way, even when they reach other cats. His eyes can be a dark blue, it all depends on his many moods.
//Whats on the Inside//: Many a tom are jealous of this leader. He attracts all the females, and his body is practically perfect. But none of them realize what's really on the inside. Skystar is fierce, brave, and can be defiant. He had only been a warrior a few moons when his siblings suddenly vanished. He was in major despression for moons. He spoke to no one at Gatherings, and spoke only when asked by his clan leader. Soon enough, his siblings Wizardshard and Firespark were finally found and brought home to StormClan, after being nearly killed by a hurricane, he has been having the best time of his life. He gets along with almost everyone, and really no one steals his heart, unless they prove themselves loyal and trustworthy. He hates doing things against the warrior code, though when he must, he must. He always surprises himself, even in the darkest hours. His best friend was Flaregiven, a cat he knew until his death.
//Tell us a story//: Skystar was born and raised, obviously, in StormClan by his parents Cinderpetal and Goldenflash. He was one of his parents' 3 kits: Skykit, Wizardkit, and Firekit. They were the only litter his parents ever had together. Skykit was always the serious one, while Wizardkit was like a genius, and Firekit always the mischevious one. Well, Skykit had a good friend named Fernkit, a pretty gray she-cat. Well, one day, they were out of the nursery, and the queens were grooming themselves and talking to their mates, when Fernkit squealed,"Ooh! A bird!" Skykit, knowing very well that any kit could die from getting too close to a hawk, dragged his sister and with Wizardkit on his tail, shoved them both in the nursery. He waited nervously for her to return, but she never did. Angelmask, Fernkit's mother, was wailing for moons. Then, Flarekit was born. The next day, after Fernkit's death, Skykit and his siblings were made into apprentices. Skykit was lucky enough to get his aunt, Squirreltail, while his siblings got the deputy and clan leader. Flarekit got a tomcat named Darktail. Well, Squirreltail never told Skypaw to do anything. She just showed him, and he did it. She was never the kind of cat to punish him, only to ask him what he did wrong, and how could he have fixed it. Finally, he and Flarepaw were made warriors, right after Wizardshard and Firespark's ceremonies. Skysting was a great warrior, he was also brave in battle. Soon enough, he was given a apprentice, by the name of Cinderpaw. The white warrior trained her well, and she became a credit to her clan. He and Flaregiven were always together during hunting or patrols, and they got along well. One day, Skysting had been hunting, when a strange scent tickled his nose. It smelled like Flaregiven, and a CelestrialClan cat! A female! When Skysting poked his head through the bushes, he saw his best friend, and a female cat, mating together by the river. Disgusted, Skysting turned and headed back to camp. Flaregiven greeted him normally, but the look in his eyes was differnet. Then, each day afterward, Skysting made sure that Flaregiven was with him everywhere he went. Finally, Flaregiven snuck away again. Some time later, Skysting had helped the StormClan deputy sort out patrols, and he was the only warrior left. They weren't expecting a battle patrol. CelestrialClan cats poured in his home, knocking down the nursery and walls that surrounded it. In the midst of all this, Skysting saw Flaregiven's mate, and hurled himself at her. But she moved, and went to attack another cat with a white pelt and blue eyes. Finally, after a long battle, Flaregiven spotted his mate, her throat cut open, and blood oozing out the sides. It was later that day, when the leader of StormClan announced Skysting deputy. Soon after, Flaregiven attacked. He tried to kill his best friend, and Skysting called him a player. In the end, Skysting won, and he buried his friend along side his dead mate, who never bore his kits. Soon, the leader died, and Skysting was made leader.
IC Example: Crouching low, Skysting slunk slowly through StormClan undergrowth. Quiet as a mouse, the white warrior's pelt gleaming in the darkness, he stalked his prey: A young squirrel. It had no idea he was there. When he was close enough, Skysting pounced, squirrel dying instantly.
There's something odd about tonight. It's too quiet. Skysting thought. Way too quiet. Suddenly a bright ball of ginger fur pounced onto Skysting's back. He immediately knew the wide paws, and the sturdy muscles attacking him. "Flaregiven!" Skysting yowled. "What are you doing?"
His friend replied through a mouthful of fur. "Killing you!" He hissed, flipping Skysting around. Skysting wasn't about to be beaten. "Why, in the name of StarClan, are you attacking me?"
"You killed Dreamwhisper!"
"Did not!" Skysting hissed. "That might have been Whiteflower!"
"No, it was you!" And that was the last thing Skysting ever heard from his best friend's mouth, for as Flaregiven was speaking, Skysting twisted himself over and got ahold of his friend's neck. And he bit down. Hard, killing Flaregiven, and all those broken memories. Forever.
"I'm sorry, Flaregiven. You were the best friend a cat like me could ever have. You were like a brother to me. Except, unlike you, I have a family. Wizardshard, and Firespark. They may only be my siblings, but you broke the rules, and were willing to pay for the prices you set down." Skysting's eyes watered, and he choked on the last sentence, and finally whispered, "I loved you." Picture:
Hmmmmm.... Maybe, I'll make one.
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Post by &&Fell&& on Sept 1, 2009 18:02:50 GMT -5
Accepted!
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