Cobracoil-StormClan-DONE!

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Name(s):
Cobrakit
Cobrapaw
Cobracoil
Gender: She-cat
Age: 21 moons
Clan: StormClan
Rank: Deputy
Short Description: Gorgeous tan she-cat with white paws and amber eyes.

//Whats on the outside//:
//Body//

Corbacoil's body is slender and sleek. She is not to fight in brute force, but rather dodge and slip around the enemy, like a snake. She is skinny, but not sickly so. Her legs and tail are both long and can stretch far, making her an excellent runner.

//Pelt//

Cobracoil has a meduim-length pelt that bristles often. It is smooth and well taken care of, thus it has a glossy shine. The fur at the end of her tail seems to lengthen out after he skin in bone, almost like a feather.

Her coat is the same shade of sand; tan. Though, darker tabby marks streack threw her fur like small veins, turning and getting smaller as is stretched out. What makes her a little but different from a usual tabby is that her paws are pich white, one of her foot has the snow color up to her anckle

//Eyes// Simple a luring, Cobracoil has deep amber eyes, slightly squinted with her common emotion. They are fairly set apart.

//Whats on the Inside//:

Cobracoil is gentle to the young, rude the older. She is very snappy in the mornings and she dares anyone to disagree with her at that time. Though, she rather just glare and give a stright warning then really say anything. She is more pateint with the young, and happy around kits. It is her dream to have a few litters on her own, but cant find a suitable mate. She can be quick and eye-rolling with apprentices, but that is only to sharpen them up. She loves spending the night gazing at the stars and wondering which ancerstor is which star. Her memory is a sharp as a claw,so its easy to rely on her to remember any little detail one could forget. Overall, shes a classic SHadowClan ancestor with a good fashioned twist.

//Tell us a story//:

Cobrakit-

Loveable, simple, and adorible, Cobrakit was like most kits. She was sister too Black-kit and daughter to Dreamshadow and Scartalon. Scartalon was a darker folk, but still loved his chldrne all the same. He was a noble warrior, willing to make any kin proud. Dreamshadow was quieter, but a little dark if you broke threw her. Nother the less, she was very pretty and where Corbrakit got most of her looks from. Cobrakit was a little stubborn and an eye-roller, but enjoyable to be around when she was apprenticed.

Cobrapaw-

Cobrapaw and Blackpaw were best firends and did everything together. Together they cuase much chaos, but they where loved by the gloomer ones. Cobrapaw's mentor was Verminheart, and she agreed with many his name suited him well. He pushed her to the limit every session, and she soon was jealous that her brother was apprenticed by Scartalon nad not herself, were she recived no praise or pride. After 14 moons of torchure, Cobrakit became a warrior with her new name, Cobracoil.

Cobracoil-

As a warrior, she completed her persoanilty change and became who she was now. Cobracoil sayed close to her brother, Blackstrike, as much as possible. Soon, she was choosen to mentor a new appentice named Redpaw, while her brother recived his own apprentice, Icepaw. Cobracoil trained Redpaw gently and gave her better care then her own mentor had. Redpaw, being a very bright she-cat learned quickly and became a warrior at 12 moons. Redbird was her new name. Icepaw had one more moon of trainign before becoming Icemask.

The death of the old deputy, Fangburn, hurt many. Nyxstar choose Cobracoil oujt of her classic personality and good leadership along with courage. Cobracoil was as proud as bunch, and her father and mother showe dmuch affection. Blackstrike was horribly jealous to the piont he could no longer speak to her without getting angry. Cobracoil and her brother grew apart quickly, and soon rarley spoke to each other. Yet, Cobracoil ocntiued to remain a loyal deputy and ignore her immature brother.

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